I'm Aware, An Amateur Poem of Sorts~Day 13

I'm holding on by a thread.

These #write31days & #5mfw are testing my strengths and I'm bone tired and want to throw in the rope, but I decided instead to do an amateur poem which was done very quickly and actually it was more entertaining than I thought. It kept me awake to the night and so it here goes: I'm Aware.


I'm aware that the sun will rise
no matter what I do it will always shine 
For the sun cannot be darkened
by a loud, unnerving request of mine.

I need more time, to think to sleep
I need more time for me to breathe.
Silent, slow and in good prose 
I'm aware because the sun tells me so.

They come in fast at lightning speed
Hungry bellies, laughing grins
little toes, little feet, 
I have no regrets; I am complete. 

I'm aware that before the days done
I will have lost all my patience and have none.
How it can go so fast?
I know I will not get another chance.

I'm aware of loud buzzing flies
that sneak in at me and may spill lies
The worlds aloud of them
it comes across the screen at all times.

Hush all the loud noises.
Hush all the shows unkind.
I'm aware because the sun tells me so;
Give ear to words that speak divine.

3 comments:

  1. I love that you changed it up and found something to delight in! This challenge is a long haul, isn't it? We can do this, my friend.

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  2. I love that you changed it up and found something to delight in! This challenge is a long haul, isn't it? We can do this, my friend.

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    1. Christina, I loved writing a bit of sloppy poetry and this series quite a change for me as well! Almost to the end of the challenge or maybe the beginning of something new?

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